Sher Rin Loh
S. Nice texture and its application in architecture
W. There’s no indication of the relation between upper and lower spaces.
Hyun-Min Park
S. Coherence between section sketch and architecture development.
W. Simplicity of architecture design
Wade Cogle
S. Clarity and consistence in each design stage. Creativeness in stairs and texture design.
W. Submission has to be in accordance with the requirement
Ben Ricketts
S. Potential architecture quality indicated in section sketch and early model.
W. Inconsistence in the design process. Simplicity of final architecture design.
Kevin Suganda
S. Cultural motif embodied in texture and section sketches.
W. Disconnection between stairs and building. Underground space needs to be further developed
Jing Liu
S. Nice texture design
W. Disconnection between section sketch and final model. The final architecture design seems too domestic.
Julie Lien
S. Clare indication of the up- and underground spaces in section. Stair design
W. Simple solution in architecture
Yunqing Zheng
S. Stair design and its integration with the building in your draft model.
W. Inconsistence from section sketch to final architecture.
Rebekah Araullo
S. Creativeness in stair design. Skill in organizing different geometries.
W. The relation between up- and underground spaces needs to be shown in section. Lack of coherence between section sketch and architecture development.
Tianlu Jiang
S. Creativeness in stair design.
W. underground space needs further consideration, and the connection between up- and underground spaces is weak.
James Liu
S. Coherence between section sketch and architecture design. Richness in the up-ground space.
W. Internal spaces need to be indicated in a section.
Harry Ingham
S. attempt in making three layers of spaces (upper in-between, below)
W. Architecture design needs to be clearly represented. Drawing skill needs to be improved.
Devon Rees
S. Creativeness in stair design.
W. underground space needs further consideration, and the connection between up- and underground spaces is weak.
Anya Courtney
S. consistence from conceptual sketch to architecture development
W. lack of details and refinement
Nicholas Fiddis
S. consistence from conceptual sketch to architecture development
W. Lack of 3 dimensional exploration in the translation from section to architecture. Underground space needs further consideration.
Zahra Dargahi
S. Nice hand drawings
W. Underground space needs further consideration.
Shuo Gu
S. Provide three options.
W. Up- and underground spaces need a demarcation. Simple and ‘domestic’ architecture solution.
Jeremy Hartono
S. good rendering skill
W. Underground space needs further consideration.
James Imperial
S. Complexity and richness in architecture design
W. The relation between up- and underground spaces needs to be shown in section image. Lack of coherence between section sketch and architecture development.
