Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Strength and Weakness of your schemes in EX.2

Anya Courtney
S. The interlock of the massing is quite interesting.
W. Lack of details in model, and lack of shadow cast on model in the renderings.

Ben Ricketts
S. The integration of model and landscape. Landscape design.
W. Hand drawing skill, and lack of details in model.

Caitlin Henningsen
S. Effort in producing axonometric drawings
W. Submission not exactly to requirement.

Devon Rees
S. Architecture quality in the model is great.
W. Hand drawing skill.

Hyun Min Park
S. Richness in architecture spaces.
w. Landscape needs to be further development.

James (Wei)Liu
S. Landscape design
W. Graphic layout for axonometric drawings is overdone

James Imperial
S. Consistence and clarity in design process. Nice graphic.
W. Lack of shadow cast on model

Jeremy Hartono
S. Elegant architecture composition
W. Red artificial lighting has diminished the space quality.

Jing Liu
S. Rich architecture space. Nice texture and axonometric drawings.
W. Stair/landing in the model does not work properly. View of perspectives need to be more selective.

Julie Lien
S. Internal space quality.
W. Lack of external view of the model. Hand drawing skill.

Kevin Suganda
S. Nice rendering in model alone.
W. Lack of space and spatial connection in the massing.

Nicholas Fiddis
S. Integration of architecture and landscape.
W. Textures on model are overdone. Lack of details in model.

Rebekah Araullo
S. Consistence and clarity of design process. Virtuosity in building the environment in C.W.
W. There is no image revealing the whole model with the landscape.

Sher Rin Loh
S. Creativeness in texture design.
W. Lack of details in model.

Shou Gu
S.Textures and axonometric drawings are done properly.
W. Lack of variety in viewing the model. Simply architectural solution.

Tianlu Jiang
S. Creative relationship between model and landform.
W. texture are overdone on the model.

Wade Cogle
S. Rich space experience with proper architectural details. Nice textures.
W. The duplication of model seems overdone.

Yunqing Zheng
S. The connection of model and landform is creative.
W. Hand drawing skill. Lack of details in the model.

Zahra Dargahi
S. Complexity in architecture. Nice graphic.
W. Textures on the model are overdone. Landform is too simple.